You would think I’d know better
than to draw conclusions
but it’s that time of year—
overworked carriers
and bitter cold to boot, dark
before the new guy comes
and what with partygoers’ cars
blocking both sides of the street
my fading numbers covered
by the wind-skewed Christmas swag
(only one digit’s difference
in our address begs the fail)—
again, today, I got your mail
Had you been home
I’d have brought it to your door
icy sidewalk notwithstanding
nor new-kitchen contractor’s van
in your drive—the high-end
catalog, Christmas cards from far
and wide, your trust-fund statement
(or bank-official like that)—
I begin to believe it’s more
than dog versus cat, the good fence
or satisfying strong-magnet snick
of your new-last-summer mailbox
that separates us
Hard not to draw conclusions…(K)
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It must be the writer’s instinct! 🙂
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Particularly loved the first stanza!!
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Thanks very much!
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I was in the post office when I saw someone return a mis-delivered letter, mentioning a number off by only ten, so likely only two doors down and across the street. The trip to the post office had to more effort than walking across te street, so definitely something going on there.
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It seems some people would rather complain than be helpful…but maybe that’s drawing the wrong conclusion?
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True enough, though.
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I have an acquaintance with a neighbor on a different street, same number- we exchange Misdelivered mail and in this way we met. !! Enjoyed this view of a similar situation.
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I did feel this was a Claudia-type poem. 🙂
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What a nice thing to say! I fell complimented. And… I think you are right! I liked it and felt at home in it right off
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I think I’d be drawing conclusions, too. 🙂
Sometimes we get the mail that belongs to the people across the street (though not often). I usually just drop it in their mailbox.
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Yes, it’s really more funny than annoying. So far. 🙂
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“your new-last-summer mailbox
that separates us” ***
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You know I took that line out–afraid it was too much–then put it back in. I’m glad you liked it.
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hnnahhty
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Wonderful write.
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Thank you!
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this image at the end is so effective: “satisfying strong-magnet snick
of your new-last-summer mailbox.” perhaps it’s the “snick” that sounds just right. well done!
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Thanks very much, and Happy New Year!
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