1. Devil’s Workshop
One tangled scarf-skein
fails; I no longer want this
choking cloud color
2. Budget Accommodations
On shoestring of doubt
you get the whole shiny house
hollow, echoing
haunting the way you wanted
yesterday, buyer’s remorse
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Graceful Press Poetry 
“shoestring of doubt”–great image
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Thank you–it was actually the starting point, pulled from a free-write. 🙂
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I love that first part: ‘that choking cloud colour’—playing with the senses. Second part—we’re house-hunting so I’d rather not think about buyer’s remorse!
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Ha, we are due to close on the house we’re buying next week. Been through a few sleepless nights already.
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We’re giving ourselves three years to find the right one, to avoid the cold sweats 🙂
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Nice pairing!
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