(lakeside)
and it turns out water
is only water. it may slosh
and splash, undulate, crash
and okay, sparkle, shimmer
gleam gold. or gray
in shadow, green in light
right down to the rocks
it caresses, rounding
here, near the shore—
or out there, sucking sand.
see, the dog will flail and swim
kicking up white froth, biting hard
at each wave (they never cease)
long tongue licking water
long-legged deliberate splash.
(no creature more prosaic
than a dog) so here I sit, done
with words. why bother noting
it dazzles? the boats drone on
and past, in deeper blue
seagulls scatter
This is wonderful Jennifer…once again you have conveyed something in words that appears to evade expression. The dog biting at the waves is priceless.
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Thank you, Janice. ❤ One of those times when I thought I had nothing worth saying…then the words started their healing magic…
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Just lovely (yes it’s actually me)! I’ve felt this way so many times but you put it so beautifully that it simply can’t ever be the end – I hope!
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Hi there! It made my day to hear from you. And thank you. I do eventually realize that I’m lying to myself when I think I don’t need to be writing.
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I’ve missed being here, reading and commenting. Such a lovely piece to drop in on! Thought of you when I was at the Yeats exhibit in Dublin last week.
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It must have been an amazing trip! Funny thing, today is the first I’ve posted in about 6 weeks…and I’ve missed being here too.
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Good to hear from both of you!
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I just saw your comment now – sorry! I can’t imagine you not writing for 6 weeks. Being away as become more and more of a thing in my mind. So here I am, trying to make time to write again. And yes, the trip was amazing 🙂
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Yes, good to hear your voice. And of course “only water” is so much more…(K)
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Thank you. Observation and letting go of expectation…good therapy 🙂
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Yes to all of this. You conjure up such a wonderful image here–the water, the dog. . .
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Thank you, Merril.
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Apropros, Jennifer… I’ve shut down my blog… But you did find a way to reopen that door, with this pen. I wish you good tidings, and thanks for having traveled along . Peace and good writing ~ M
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I will miss your words.
Thanks for your encouragement &
blessings to you &
hope to meet again, someday…
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🙂 Very fun ..
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