in one glimmer of nothing, and how easy
—you see—to vanish, to sink in the same
darkness, illogic, as generations before.
no one knows you in your shadowing:
not devil nor demons nor angels nor men
(who wrote you off, and how long ago?)
—but will it be now, at mud’s deep
that you instinctively reach an arm out
to swim, that the air takes your lungs
with all the force of forgiveness?
Resonating with today’s Hafiz read, “To Make You Perfect,” translated by Daniel Ladinsky
More crosscurrenting: I’ve also been working on a group of shadow poems, and the same themes pop up. Who or what lurks in the shadows we make?
I will be posting one this week, perhaps tomorrow, you can compare and contrast….(K)
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Awesome!
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The force of forgiveness – what a powerful thought!
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and one that kind of sneaked its way into the poem when I wasn’t expecting it…maybe forgiveness is like that 🙂
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That could be…both gentle and powerful at the same time. 💐
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So much to love here. And that last couplet. Sigh.
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thank you ❤
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Oh my–breathless. Beautiful.
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Thank you, Merril!
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