I am famous in these distractible parts
for half-sentences and thoughts un-done.
Listen: It is only a skipping ahead
past the boredom of a thing
once seen. The bloom is off, color fading
by the time it reaches your lips
Inspired by Hafiz, “Every City Is a Dulcimer,” translated by Daniel Ladinsky.
“If I ever don’t complete a sentence…”
This sounds familiar. For me, it’s another thought screaming for attention and pushing the first out of the way before I can complete it.
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🙂 Of course the new thought is a better one, anyway!
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Of course… unless it’s never completed!
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My grandmother used to write me letters (this was back in the 70’s when the phone was expensive and so – letters and letters – in which she would often leave sentences unfinished, not on purpose, but because she had moved on in her thoughts and her pen not keeping up. You had to figure out where she was going and fill in the blanks (sometimes easier than other times depending how great the leap was…) this poem so reminded me of her. She has been dead almost 40 years and I still remember so much about her, so well; this memory made me laugh.
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I love this story. I’m usually okay in writing, but not in conversation, especially (apparently) with my kids. 🙂
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I really liked this, Jennifer. It made me smile–skipping ahead and distracted–
I’ve found myself not finishing sentences the last couple of days because I’m a bit sleep-deprived.
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🙂 Sometimes it doesn’t seem worth the effort, for sure. Is the project done, time to get some rest now?
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No. Still not done. Sigh. Still writing the entry for the contributor who vanished and still waiting for some to appear in my in-box.
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Oh. Well, I’m cheering you on! 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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You are definitely not alone. I…. 😊
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😀
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So lovely to read you again Jennifer- it’s been too long! Xx
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Aw, I’m so glad you stopped by!
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Isn’t that the poet’s life? You have captured the uncertainty so well.
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This is also pretty much why I won’t be writing any more novels…
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Yes. Poems are a leetle but more flexible.
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