that time we time-machined it
found hope-lack, forward and back
drawn onward, grit and press (what
could we gain in the rewriting?)
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that time we time-machined it
found hope-lack, forward and back
drawn onward, grit and press (what
could we gain in the rewriting?)
Graceful Press Poetry 
a new format! (I do the same once per year).
yes, I’d favor re-writing the forward history. ~
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clean slate-y for the new year–thanks for noticing!
and there must be a way…
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I think many people would like a re-write.
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We’ll just have to keep writing better as we go along. Take what we’ve learned and put it to use. 🙂
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Wonderful write. So true. Sometimes we look back and say, if only I could… But often changes lead you in a different direction and not always a good one.
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Thank you. Yes, I can’t assume that my personal re-dos would cause any improvement. 🙂
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