skate-thin or fist-deep ?
ice smooth and still; three bold crows
crown the five-eyed tree
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skate-thin or fist-deep ?
ice smooth and still; three bold crows
crown the five-eyed tree
Graceful Press Poetry 
this haiku asks me to question what i see: just how deep is that pond? how does a tree have five eyes? i also enjoy the rhymes, especially thin — fist — still and bold — crows — crown.
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Thank you. Something about haikus…they invite playfulness, I think.
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Another wonderful image…crows. Always food for thought. (K)
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They are so imposing, especially close up. And in a group, in winter…makes me think omens, symbol, Story…
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