Frost-night church bells
dim, no night of angels but
blaring electric light—hark!
the child who came, the Son
the man with never a place
to lay his head but
shallow alleys, shopping malls
gray-sky corners, caves
We all converged on the great city
we who worshiped power
and its palaces, comfort
for cold and sore feet
while these my brothers
hurried and howled
these my sisters
huddled head-down
All this distance
from heaven to earth
woman to man to man
empty and full asking why
and when would he come
again?
Good questions. I doubt anyone has a good answer.
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So many “why?”s
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This is such a lovely poem. Sad and full of hope, simultaneously. The second stanza is my favorite.
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Thanks, Danielle. It’s funny that I wasn’t feeling any hope when I wrote it, yet when I went back and read it later, I could feel it there. Can’t help it, I guess. 🙂
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All my favorite themes! Earthly vs sacred, theology, loneliness in a crowd – and of course Christmas. That line break before “dim” sets up the tone for the whole poem really effectively.
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Thanks so much for this. It’s means a lot to know that someone connected with it.
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Aww, Jen! I just love your poetry. There was something tragic in the language here. I especially loved the line “these my sisters huddled head-down.” Loved the theme as well. Worldly and holy combined.
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Thanks very much, Melony. I’m glad the mood came through for you.
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The allusions to traditional Christmas themes (carol lyrics, bells) played well of the modern details (electric lights, shopping malls).
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I’m glad you mentioned the carol lyrics…actually my starting point on this one.
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This one gave me shivers. (K)
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Good! (?) 🙂
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Yes, good.
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Really poignant with a beautiful flow. I too loved the combination of earthly and spiritual.
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Thanks very much!
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This has such a seamless strength to it…I think you managed to meld both past and present and highlight our dilemma.
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Thank you…”seamless strength” makes me so happy.
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