time now to stop apologizing
for having time to dance and play
at beauty-making (the gift
to be simple, the gift
to be free) to plan
plant and watch grow
my harvest
is free
(time)
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Graceful Press Poetry 
Love this… Words and sentiment!
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Thank you very much!
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You’re welcome!
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Wonderful! Love this too!
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Thank you–much appreciated!
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Now the song is going through my head. 🙂
I like the way the words flow together in this without a pause. It sort of floats.
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Thank you, Merril. One of the choirs sang this at my daughter’s concert the other night–lo and behold it sneaked into my poem. 🙂
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Strange how that happens. 😉
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Lovely poem! Your use of the parenthetical was particularly effective. Also, “beauty-making” was a sweet turn of phrase. It’s simple and elegant. Well done!
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Thank you very much. I am overfond of parentheses, so I’m glad to know when they work rather than distract. 🙂
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I think this may be one of my favorite poems I’ve read of yours and I have always been a fan. The words, the meaning, the structure of parentheses and italics just bring this to life. All of it.
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Aw, Melony, you’re the best. Thank you for that. xo
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Picture-perfect, like always.. !
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Humbled by your kindness. xo
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This is gorgeous – as usual. 🙂 But really, it’s a lovely and timely reminder. The repetition of “gift” at the end of each line adds a light but significant emphasis, and those last three lines are just wonderful.
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Thank you, Christine. I was so happy those syllables worked out on the “gift” lines. 😉
And I definitely wrote this as a reminder to myself…
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What a gift you have given to us! A visual feast with words, so lovely.
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Thank you!
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I love how this flows and I think you have an excellent final 3 lines. And I love “beauty-making!”
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Thank you!
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I find this both lyrical and inspiring… it’s message is one I catch at fleeting moments…
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Smiling…so glad when something resonates. Thank you!
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Big smile at this. Yes, perhaps.
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