16 thoughts on “Once more, with feeling”

  1. I like how you played with antonyms here and Ruby already beat me to the precisely/more/less idea. You worked those line breaks hard. My favorite is the sharp red/ beauty. It reminded me of cardinals.

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  2. ‘sharp red’ – is this the point? There seems to be something soft running through this poem, but then this stab? I am up in Door County this weekend and the color changes are spectacular but I am not sure the red is anything other than sharp, as you describe. And as much as we want to think of them as happy, I have my doubts.

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