What do you say to the earnest smiles
the hearty aren’t-you-glad-to-be-backs?
It was no exile from the first day you knew
you didn’t need to pretend to belong
You thought your skin must be stamped with it
a continent of rivers so swelling your breath
that you’d be forgiven the slow answer but
can’t they see you have no word for home?
Inspired by a new call for submissions at Silver Birch Press.
I really love the flow of the second stanza. This whole poem creates such a feeling of–I’m not sure of the word, frustration at being back combined with exhilaration at discovering this new place?
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I was trying to sort out my feelings, too. Longing, for sure. Frustration (boredom?) probably. The draft was very much longer and there might be a somewhat different poem in it yet.
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What fun! 🙂
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The ambivalence of home. Where is it? (K)
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Yes! This is it exactly. Home is where the heart is but what if your heart is in multiple paces? It’s hard to imagine unless you’ve lived it, that spiritual awareness of and intimacy with other places, other homes.
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I’m keeping these words in mind as I work through the whole idea. Thank you. The spiritual awareness, yes.
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From one kindred traveller to the next.
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Why would anyone assume you would be glad to be back? We live in envy of you … 🙂
The first two lines of the second stanza give me goose bumps. Yum!!
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🙂 and thank you. Hoping to do some deeper digging on this topic…
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Looking forward to reading whatever you discover.
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