I had those years of baggage
packed all away, closed
my heart, turned off
the light, blindly chose
first flight to a desert island
Anticipating wave-song
canvases of stars
the only dissonance distant
in shriek of unseen birds
Now I can’t regret
those sunny dresses
cute hats cast wordless
and strewn over empty blue
There’s something really wonderful and magical about this.
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Oh, thank you. Much appreciated.
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I really like this piece. I’ve come back to it a couple of times now. I think it’s hopeful.. I love the final stanza.
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Thank you. It’s funny, because I started in such a down place. I can’t seem to stay there, though, when writing.
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Wistful and yet…yes, full of hope. (K)
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I keep trying to write a really depressing poem…
Just kidding!
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I hope that means you found something to replace the sunny dresses. Stars and distant birds maybe.
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I would definitely wear stars and birdsong.
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So much more poetic than chain store junk 🙂
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I love the title as much as the poem.
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I will give my husband credit for the title. He took a flight the other day, and when he arrived told me that his suitcase had failed. I just saw it in capital letters. 🙂
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This is really wonderful. I’ve read it a few times, too. There is so much here. I choose also to think it’s hopeful.
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Thanks, Merril. What an optimistic bunch we are. Just what the world needs 😉
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🙂
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I really am a happy with the transformation in this poem. It seems like it starts with a harsh kind of knowing and ends with an ‘I don’t need to know,’ which is very liberating. Not sure that is what you wanted to express, but it certainly captures my writer’s journey.
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I definitely wrote myself out of a low spot with this one. I like that you characterize it as “I don’t need to know.” That is helpful.
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