under sea-sky

all
silver
no plans no
memory we live
on what washes ashore
on wind and cloud-change
under sea-sky limits dissolve
bluegraygreen we forget
no reason no
division we live
lumpedandtumbled
alike smooth placid
pebbles
all

 

Jane’s weekly challenge #31 gives us a sparkling beach photo and a selection of atmospheric words. 

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18 thoughts on “under sea-sky

  1. This works so well, with the form playing perfectly off the words, the swaying, thumping shoreline. I like to think we have more control … and that we can keep our sharp edges if we want …

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