Sands, setting sun, rising
blood-tide; clash and curse
and moan. Even I feel the surge
of joy at the charge, pent anger
cloud-bursting to hack
and sing. This grim violence
ever present: in our bones
the need to fight—
eager!—for any cause
to call someone Other.
She asked you to save
the innocents. There are none
here. From first man to last
we are broken.
Another view, via the Rose-Witch project, of a theme I wanted to explore in the Babylon, Astronomy poem. My take on Camlann is always colored by Tennyson’s imagery in “The Passing of Arthur.”
Your word choice and rhythm makes me hear swords thrusting and clashing. It’s very powerful.
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You said it so well, what I wanted to express after reading this powerful poem.
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Thank you. How I love to feel powerful. 😉
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Thank you. It’s the kind of imagery I love to play with.
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