black and white:
I made it
you wear it
sometimes
*
I don’t know how to feel only
the hands keep working
regardless
you hate the cold
we text about weather
the sun slowly moves now
across an ocean
we keep the same hours
*
we stood on that castle hill
sheep scattered below
dog racing slant impossible
angles everything else
insignificantly small
*
from the earth this chain
of lands, hands, shearers
spinners, makers
green grazing
storm sky
growling
wear that distant sun-root
with your attitude
*
love is not in the saying
and not in the doing
then where? the heart only
a physical thing
blood beating regardless
*
it’s called infinity
but of course
there is beginning and end
seamed together
with trust it won’t unravel
Love the way you weave the strands together here. I love the last stanza.
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Thank you. Been thinking on this one a few days… 🙂
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My thoughts, exactly.
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I really liked the way you tied this one up at the end. I must have read the last two stanzas a hundred times.
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I will take that as a high compliment. 🙂
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Lovely work and phrases here, Jennifer. Last stanza is gorgeous! ❤
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Thank you. xo
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Beautiful! The fourth stanza knocked me out. Love how this whole piece pulls together, and that it does so loosely. 🙂
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I did take out the “uptighter” stanzas, lol.
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Such an ache, such love, such wistfulness! I really love the rhythm, word choices and structure of 2nd stanza, and the exceptionally well-placed question mark in the 5th (again, you do punctuation so well!).
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Thank you for noticing the punctuation. It helps remind me to always be deliberate about it.
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I have an image of vast sky and ocean, and the threads of a wool scarf joining two distant places. Ethereal and absolutely gorgeous.
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Thank you, Jane. As soon as Wales came into it, it shaped up for me. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Jane Dougherty Writes and commented:
Just love this poem.
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Thank you for sharing.
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