So the air
can change me—past clothes,
curtains, blind-
slats, glass, sky,
rose-cloud, geese in slanting flight,
fat snowflakes, swirling
A shadorma attempt for Jane’s weekly challenge.
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Graceful Press Poetry 
I love the idea of being “possible in layers.”
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Thank you. Have to get down past the bleh to the good part. 🙂
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Layers of being. Great idea 🙂
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Inspired by you and your challenge. 🙂
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Not sure what a shadorma is but I like it! I like the use of “blind” and it’s multiple possible meanings.
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As far as I have discovered, it’s simply syllables: 3/5/3/3/7/5
Fun, try it!
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I am looking out of your window. Pretty sight.
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Thank you!
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Such imagery! ***
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This image is evocative. Even the title opens so many possibilities. Lovely.
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