Red seeds piled in plastic bowl—
I wonder how this fruit could so tempt
a girl. When I first read how Persephone fell
for it, I had never seen or tasted one.
I imagined something bigger,
substantial, sweet.
There’s a binful at the store, tumbled,
lumpish; I take one home, open it,
separate flesh from seed, meditate on myth
and moral. I see that I too could chain myself
for the sake of something fleeting,
gleaming, small.
“I see that I too could chan myself…” that last thought left me with chills. Beautiful yet haunting and lonely in a universal sense. Love the meandering approach you took here, which is less usual for you. It really worked and brought me along from the shops into your home and then into your thoughts.
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Ha! Meandering is definitely the way it came along. 🙂
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I agree with SL, beautiful, haunting is the quality of this verse! I traveled with it into your thoughts…
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Thank you for these words. I fought with this one. Sometimes it’s no good when you think you know what you want to get across. It started as an in-my-head write, too, which always leads to disappointment once it gets to the page. 😉
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This interests me because I felt the same way about pomegranates – I thought they might be something other than they are. But you know, when I finally had one to eat, I felt the opposite way – a fruit this much trouble should be ashamed of itself, I thought! and flung it in the trash! Impatience and rejection was what it did to me. Very interesting to read this and see where you ended up, because I did not expect it.
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No doubt all the work had been done for Persephone. I think I have finally gotten the knack of getting into pomegranates–though sometimes they sit in the fruit bowl a few days before I work up the energy to tackle them. 🙂
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Like the others here – I enjoyed what you had to say just as much as how you chose to say it. I think you definitely won the fight you had with this one!
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Thank you for the encouragement–it means a lot!
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Nice! Those last couple lines are so revealing and unexpected, and a little heartbreaking. 🙂
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Thank you. ❤
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