Dear backyard birch, Even without your leaves
you are still lovely. The blue-jewel lantern-light
sets off your bare branches. (It runs on solar power.)
Dear human, I am not one for jewels; my power
comes from deep hum of the earth, my open leaves
in strong sun. You wreck my winter sleep with blue light.
Dear birch, If it bothers you, I can take down the light.
Though it makes me happy to see its glow, a hint of power
to get me through this long season without leaves.
Dear human, Leaves, light or no, I will be here, rooted in power.
Imagination tickled by this article about emails between people and trees.
Outstanding!
I love how you created a conversation within the tritina form. Plus, your personification of the tree in all its stateliness was fantastic.
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Wow, thanks! I did have fun with this one.
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Such a profound poem, Jennifer. Loved it. I intended to put this comment when I read it before but missed it.
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Thank you. 🙂
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What a great article! and the poem fits perfectly. Yes, I think I would like to have a conversation with my backyard tree too. (K)
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I bet your tree would love to hear from you! 🙂
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No doubt!
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I love this one. The tree has such dignity.
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Thank you. I guess it’s natural to see trees as wise and dignified. Maybe I should imagine a silly tree, one who really wants some sparkly lights…
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I think the mimosa is a silly tree just on its own and I always have, for instance. And I think of dogwoods as prissy!
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Whatever else you say about people, you have to admit, they’re funny.
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Spoken like a true tree-spirit. 😉
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🙂 Which tree would you be? I think I’d be a Yew—I wouldn’t have to lose my leaves. That must be tough for a tree.
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Fabulous! Inventive and different and I always love to ponder the trees. Such royalty in this one’s thoughts. Wonder how my little dwarf willow thinks…
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Ask it! 🙂
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Trees make excellent conversationalists. And I love how you reveal their strength as something we can tap into during these barren months.
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Trees give so much. 🙂
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