Dear shadow, you grow
too big—spread soft and hazy
with thinking, no edge
Day 12 of the PAD Chapbook Challenge, prompt is “After (blank).” I found the shadow over at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie.
Dear shadow, you grow
too big—spread soft and hazy
with thinking, no edge
Day 12 of the PAD Chapbook Challenge, prompt is “After (blank).” I found the shadow over at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie.
I so enjoy reading what you write.
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Well, that just made my day! 🙂
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I love this — how the you shift the power of the shadow so subtly. 🙂
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That shadow–I should treat it with more respect! Maybe give it a few more words than a haiku…
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I made the mistake of jumping into the poem without really looking at the title. Good, but so much better when read as a whole. Love the way you are working with the challenge prompts.
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Thanks, Cyn. I’m terrible about skipping over titles, myself. 🙂
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I think this is wonderful. As usual, I love reading it several times 🙂
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Thanks for that. Nice to hear from you!
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I love the way you combine challenges to create an image which is both visual and also something I connect with at a more feeling, intuitive level.
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