Piles of time, preserved—inky voices
She sat a desk like this
stilled but for angle or curve of a word
by candle and inkpot
wanting to mean but never received
quill-scratching her heart
pleas and declarations, like bones
life beating hard, alone
sealed in a box
Inspired by this article about a recently discovered box of 17th-century letters–never delivered.
I love the form! This phrase – stilled but for angle or curve of a word, absolute fave.
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Thank you. I found I had two very different drafts but kinda wanted to use them both. Voila! haha
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Undelivered letters – it’s like a box of potential, a collection of what-ifs. I can see why they inspired poetry.
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I’m still thinking about this story. Just fascinating. Of course I’m all about the historical stuff.
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Very inventive. It all weaves together so very well. And I think she is me. 🙂
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Quill-scratching your heart?
❤
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Yes!
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I love the two poems in one! So well done 🙂
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Thanks, Stacie.
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I think you honor the writer of the discarded letters deeply with this poem. Poem within a poem, hidden but not. Gorgeous.
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Thank you. You are too kind. I was thinking of how people used to “cross” their letters, and that gave me the idea to mash my two different approaches together.
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Someone could get a novel out of that story. The two threads weaving together give a lovely effect. Have you tried out a patoum yet? I challenge you 🙂
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This story just fascinates me. So now I am working on a pantoum about this letter-writer. If it is awful, I will save it for your eyes only.
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I doubt anything you write could be awful. There’s something terribly sad about letters anyway. Email has taken a lot of pathos out of our lives.
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This is simply stunning. The history, the art of words, the image you conjure up of her pouring out her heart, the mystery! I love your intertwined poems, especially the way they work together just as well as they do separately. Oh, and “inky voices” – love that 🙂
Now I want to copy you without copying you…
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Aw, thanks. I wasn’t sure how the two pieces would work together, but I couldn’t choose which line to follow. I think the historical vibe is very strong these past few days. 🙂
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