Every morning, one or two—
true, how what distantly frightens
rightens on closer view
in morning dew-light glowing
growing in grace as you
do your own talent-work
I stole the title from Jane Dougherty’s blog post, and though we have had numbers of spiders coming inside lately, this is probably not really about spiders.
Really descriptive and lovely.
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Thank you. I wanted to do something elegant and “serious” to do justice to the title, but this came out instead. 🙂
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Love this and its layers of meaning. Your rhyme scheme and rhythm build on each other beautifully!
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Thanks very much. I had fun with it. So nice to hear from you!
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Simple yet deeply layered. Really well done.
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Thank you very much!
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This reminds me of a Robert Frost poem — Design? — You bring out this tension between fear and learning. How many time so we need to take those deep breaths?
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Now I need to do some re-reading of Frost. Thanks!
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A. R. Ammons has a poem called “Identity” that filled with spidery webs that I’m sure you’d like.
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Having finally had a chance to catch up with your blog for the first time in a while, it occurs to me (probably reoccurs) how pleasingly precisely you place your words – it simply gives the reader enjoyment (this reader, at least) to find the words arranged with such seemingly exact inevitability.
For some reason, I get the feeling that your words are somehow painted into position… though even I’m not sure what I mean by that 🙂
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Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment. Just the kind of thing that keeps me going. 🙂 And I love the idea of painting words into place.
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