No fear, here, of the long night
half a year, half a lifetime
away. We open and glow moon-
flowered, sigh with perfume
by pale stars bedewed
pity the wan, draggled dawn.
I am falling behind with my Family Poetry Project postings–but still writing every day! The kids are, too. We’re having a great time with it. The prompt for this was “Night” in 33 words or less, from A Prompt Each Day.
Oh, this is Most lovely!
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Thanks very much!
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Moon-flowered.. that is just gorgeous.. loved this piece.
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Very kind, thank you!
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“pity the wan draggled dawn.” I like what the plosives do in the last few lines. Like a stuttering exhaust on a car.
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I love that you made the leap from quiet summer evening to sputtering car exhaust. 😉
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Ahhh:
‘We open and glow moon-
flowered, sigh’
🙂 so June!
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