mean tear-water tea. Abandoned things
and I’m ready to fill any pan, pot, rift
you choose, salty-deep. The red shoe
on windblown corner, red car packed,
ocean-bound. I say it’s no proof
my heart exists; this body gushes water
from any careless wound. Like she’s not
even looking my way. Do you say I gave up?
I got tired and gave up? I say I pushed her
boat when the sea was drained dry—
with only my breath, soul’s inky shiraz.
Oh, so much buried in this piece. This is a keeper to read and reread. Awesome! Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks so much for that! One of those pieces that took off on a different path than I thought I intended. 🙂
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There is lot to like in this poem! The whole builds to those last few lines; the final phrase took my breath away.
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Oh, Motherhood. I’m glad you found something to like. Sometimes it just has to spill out.
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Glad you let it spill!!
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I really like this one. such melancholy imagery. I love that the first line begins with an image from one of my favorite children’s books.
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Those favorites just become part of you. Thanks for reading.
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