would it bring you peace to discard
this entire hand of life? to draw again
as many years, breaths, fresh heartaches
theme-park rides? throw it all to the wind
that chaff-blows east from west; stretch
to that dark edge and dive into the wave
that crash-washes all trace of your salt-perfume
when you emerge gasping from the surf
it is a birth; when you emerge blinking
from the dirt-walled cellar, it is a birth
the prairie swept clean, coast swept clear—
even of your own black-cloud faults, beliefs
that you were the hurricane, tornado
lightning arcing from sea to earth to sky
draw again, draw again
see the garden dew-fresh, unflowered, full
only of possible-to-be
The NaPoWriMo prompt for Day 23 is to use a playing card for inspiration. I drew two cards from our Fluxx deck: Discard/Draw and Peace.
This analogy works so well. Your take is fresh and fun.
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Thanks, Thom!
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so good. grace is weaved throughout our deck of life cards. scripture is peeking through the chaff blowing east from west. and i love your examples for a new birth/baptism. Lam. 3:23
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I was kind of laughing at myself…this started with a free-writing exercise, and when I looked at what I had scribbled, I thought, gee, look at all that Bible stuff that comes out when you’re not thinking about it. 🙂
Thanks for the read!
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Bible stuff. It’s everywhere! As I have said before – this week – your hyphenated words are just excellent. So much added depth of meaning. I love this one. Like the social media prompt, it’s one you’ve inspired me to try…if only I can find the time.
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Thanks very much. The Fluxx deck is fun–I don’t think I would have been able to do much with regular playing cards.
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Love it…
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Thanks for reading!
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Wow. Very Whitman-y! Love the opening of the second stanza. Nice job.
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Whitman hangover from yesterday’s reading? It was a fun exercise, might try again.
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Good hangover to have!!
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I didn’t get the Bible connection not being familiar with it. I do like your take on one of the big questions though, and trying to see the potential in a new green world
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Just an undercurrent, I think. A garden is one of my favorite images of hope.
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This was absolutely beautiful! Thank you for this. I’ve suffered from depression most of my life, I’ve felt what you describe. I loved the end, it was filled with hope and promise.
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Elle, your words made my day. Glad you found a little hope here, and thank you for taking the time to encourage me! Hugs.
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