Your life lived long
at train-speed:
rushing slowing
gaining momentum again

trying to fix one spot
in view, then
watch it blur
to green-light, blue-cloud
(painterly hues)

too fast
to make any moment stay
too slow
to (superhumanly)
reverse the day

26 thoughts on “Valediction

    1. Thank you. Trying to decide if I want to submit it to the microstories grid. Or maybe I’ll think of something really brilliant by tomorrow…


    1. It started out about me, then it was about my husband’s grandmother…so I guess it is just “life.” Thanks for your comment.


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