I expected more
but you will sit dozing
in the garden
as if this spectrum
from green to forsythia
were reason enough for being
You won’t rise to the rhythm
of truck-springs, dove-throated
scoldings; you come begging
on moth-wings for dew-drops
or even candleflame, snapping
up any crumb of praise dropped
between cracks while prating
of moonlight and blackbird song
If this kind of drowsy bee-hum
is the nectar you had in mind,
who would sip from it?
It tastes of mower-drone
inelegant clang and clatter
of construction on the next corner
whirr of what—saws? And the chairs
need repair; weeds sprout in the flags
My dear tone-deaf old thing
the blackbird is trying to teach you
while you lie there dreaming
you can sing
and fly
The NaPoWriMo Day 15 prompt is to write a poem that addresses itself.
This is brilliant work, Jennifer. Especially these lines –
“as if this spectrum
from green to forsythia
were reason enough for being.”
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Aw, thanks. This one came out pretty easily–I’m glad you liked it!
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Beautiful! Just wonderful, Jennifer! I am speechless.
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Yay! I’m glad you liked it. It kind of wrote itself, but I love it when that happens.
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I love that last stanza. So much of this is beautiful and rich, but that last stanza sounds especially hopeful and uplifting.
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I realized that those last lines could be read more than one way…and then I was glad. 🙂
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Oh, lovely lines! So glad to have found you via NaPoWriMo,
and congrats on being featured for day 23!
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Thanks so much for stopping by!
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