all green
buds around you
sunlight fierce as July
while snow still lingers in blue shade:
my spring
my spring
you give full-fledged in strong birdsong
bulb-shoots, sudden crocus
gray rain washing
all green
A mirror cinquain for the March poetry slam at yeah write.
When I was small, not much bigger than a pollywog,” said Frog, “my father said to me, ‘Son, this is a cold, gray day but spring is just around the corner.’ I wanted spring to come. I went out to find that corner…” (Arnold Lobel, Frog and Toad All Year)
Just wonderful! And Frog and Toad bring back so many sweet memories of when my boys were small. Thanks for this.
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I’m glad you enjoyed! I hope spring is finding you as well. And Arnold Lobel = genius.
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Ah lucky you, my spring is just gray skies and mildly cold weather 😉
Nice mirror cinquain, it was sweet and full of imagery and so calm… it feels like a beautiful place!
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Thanks for reading. We have been lucky to have some wonderfully springlike sunny days this week–and sudden crocus. It definitely helps to make for peaceful poetry. 🙂
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So timely and beautiful, Jennifer. I especially love the line about snow in blue shade. It is vivid.
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Thanks, Meg. I love the surprise of it–finding that snow while things are budding out all around.
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Really lovely, and nicely done. I’m with Meg on that snow in blue shade line : )
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Thank you, Kymm. We’ve had SUN this week–I think that snow is doomed. 🙂
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This is just so lovely! Thank you for sharing your inspiration, too; that adds another dimension (and the link to the title – perfect!). I love your reverence for nature shared through such delicate details. The repetition of “my spring” is particularly effective.
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It’s funny how my “waiting-for-spring brain” will always go back to Frog and Toad stories. Love them. Thanks for your sweet and thoughtful words.
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Oh, I liked that. And I’m very eager for spring as well, after all the snow and everything this winter.
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It’s time, right?
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Very nice. I like “sudden crocus.”
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Thank you. They took me by surprise when I was out last weekend–so wonderful to see color when you’re expecting gray.
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Oh man, I so have Spring on the brain too!
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The sun has been unusually cooperative this week, definitely spirit-lifting.
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Oh Jennifer – to read this on a gray rainy morning was to have sudden ray of warm spring sun. Love the line ‘you give full-fledged in strong birdsong’
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I’m glad it brought you a little spring. It’s time! Thanks for reading.
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