Born in winter it follows: pale
eyes, white thighs, welcoming
ice in your blueshadow heart
On this knife-shard we bloom
roses on the breast of the snow
The white stag founders and
in thin trees blacksilent
owls watch hunters verge-lost
Your secret cottager spins jewels
into grayrock, acres of gold
into straw
Beautiful imagery.
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That last stanza is just chilling! Love it!
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Thanks, nice to hear from you!
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I love your spun tale…quite all your own with pale eyes and white thighs. I like ‘owls watch hunters verge-lost’
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Love ‘ice in your blueshadow heart’
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Mmmm. I don’t know what I love most here. The images are powerful and complex. The rythm is perfect. Such a light touch. Beautiful job!
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I wasn’t too sure about this one–I’m glad you liked it. Maybe there’s an actual story lurking there somewhere…
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I really like how you use the line breaks to allow multiple readings. And then the dreamlike ‘confusion’ of the last stanza 🙂
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Thank you! I do love playing with line breaks.
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