She stood at the lakeside, pale
skirts summer-twilight glowing,
hair loose and light about her head
as if in water outspread. Wavelets
ankle-lapping. I called out
but oh, God, she would not listen.
She just ran and I could not
follow, all dark and I couldn’t find her.
The slap and slosh and cold water closing…
(We sat on the wall and talked,
we lay in the grass and loved.
You princes always prating
of other islands in other cold seas—
Forgive me, good sir, I am bound
for better or worse, for airier realms.)
Such haunting images! I love the first stanza! I also love how you have surfaced all the incompleteness that is not supposed to be part of fairy tales. Nice.
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Thank you. “Incompleteness” is more right than you know, haha. But hey, if it’s working for you… 😉
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Amazing!
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Thank you very much!
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interesting and creative to use the voices of a dead ophelia and a living (at least for a while) hamlet to describe what happened at the stream. just as i would guess, ophelia seems to have a wiser perspective than the prince. (i love “Wavelets/ ankle-lapping”!)
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