A dank, dark, desolate place. I met him
for the first time there. Thorn. Beneath
melting snow, rank rotting greens, this
smell oozing from my pores with the fear.
The old king’s hall, where the monster
feasts. You can read of such places,
but to stand within reach…
A stir of breeze, soft beyond high hall
timbers (darker loom against fading stars)
and then the voice in my ear: You can’t
trust her. My heart leaps (yes, against bone-cage)
as his wild, sly face appears—a man. Merely
a man. Sir Alwin, he says, mocking. Her pet name
for you? Elf-friend, you will save no one tonight.
Shriek of door hinges, flash of light. His hand
on my arm as I start forward, fumbling
for the horn. From the hall, a gurgling scream,
clash and clatter of weapons or of benches
wrenched from the floor. From Thorn, a sigh.
She’s a patent liar. Ask her if that’s not true.
“Shriek of door hinges, flash of light. His hand
on my arm as I start forward, fumbling
for the horn.” Good stuff!
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Thank you. I’m converting some prose scenes into poems…experimenting.
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Wow. What great imagery! And what interesting tension — love all of the confusion in the speaker. And then the final line. Just wonderful.
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Thank you, glad you’re liking. I’m starting with all of my favorite parts. There aren’t too many, haha.
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I miss you.
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I really enjoyed the imagery of your poem the first time I read it and then a few days ago I started reading Seamus Heaney’s translation of Beowulf and I went – “Wait a second” – and came back here. 🙂 Now the poem is even better! Awesome references – thank you!
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Oh, isn’t Heaney’s Beowulf wonderful? John Gardner’s novel GRENDEL is another view of the Beowulf story that has stuck with me for many years and must be in here somewhere. 🙂
Thanks so much for coming back with such an encouraging comment!
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