Strange, how I can see the hilltop town
lights many miles away and the headlights
of distant cars twinkling as they move down
switchback loopy roads—glittering stars
to the steady planetary glow of the towns.
But no, the planets move and so they are
the cars and the towns the fixed-star definers
of the sky: the hills are there and there. Strange,
to tell myself I am here, tonight, in Italy.
(I have to keep telling myself.) For I have seen
hills before and hilltop towns before. True
there are cypresses, tall thin shadows in this
deepening night, but I have seen stone houses
before and olive trees before. I have felt
gusty fall breezes before, seen cloud-shrouded
full moon before. I have drunk Italian wine
before. But on this chill night in this gusty breeze
under this cloud-shrouded moon, with the warm
light through the doorway of this stone house
above this olive grove (with this glass of Italian
wine in my hand), I know I am here, and am glad.
What a dreamlike journey! It seems to me you close your eyes and takes your readers to “eternal places” somewhere in your memory, like paintings… great poem! And if I remember well the latin adage “in vino veritas”… (and by the way, italian wines are SO delicious… I’ll be in Sicily next week and I’m very excited to taste some sicilian wines there 🙂 Have a nice week dear Jennifer!
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Yes, in vino veritas! A trip to Sicily sounds amazing. We returned from sunny Tuscany to rain rain rain. 😦 The Agriturismo that we stayed at had their own wines (Chianti and Montepulciano d’Abruzzo), and they were wonderful. I wish you a good week as well!
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it sounds great Jennifer (except the rain) ah Chianti… the word makes me dream 🙂 Thanks for your kind words!
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Absolutely stunning. It feels like I am there 🙂 thanks for the beautiful picture!
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Aw, thanks. Even on vacation I had to have my alone time. And it turned into words… 🙂
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…which is definitely to the benefit of your readers 🙂
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This poem has such a strong sense of place and of immediacy at the same time. Kicks up a lot of wonderful memories for me as I read through it — exquisite.
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I’m glad you liked it. I thought it might be too straight-out-of-my-head rough, but maybe that’s the immediacy. 😉
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Beautiful Jennifer, hope you enjoyed Tuscany. Your words brought me right there.
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Thanks for reading. We had a wonderful time–and I definitely used info from your travel posts, so thank you for that, too!
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I loved this, Jennifer – such a dream like quality – loved these lines –
‘But no, the planets move and so they are
the cars and the towns the fixed-star definers
of the sky: the hills are there and there. Strange,
to tell myself I am here, tonight, in Italy.’
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