The distant hills are age-old forested in greenish black-
birds singing wind blowing at all points and one baby
inconsolably crying a dozen shades of green in the garden
leaves reaching to the open song-filled sky roses blown
and fading (beauty, too, in fading) and the garden needs
no consolation
I dreamed I was a hundred-rooted plant
deep-spreading in earth magnificent sidewalk-breaking
strength like next-door cherry fruiting bright red and blood-
red under cloud-bowed sky sheltering the blackbirds shading
the inconsolable
Amazing dream Jennifer! …”a hundred-rooted plant
deep-spreading in earth magnificent sidewalk-breaking
strength like next-door cherry fruiting bright red and blood-
red under cloud-bowed sky sheltering the blackbirds shading
the inconsolable”
I love the metaphor: “one baby inconsolably crying a dozen shades of green”. Something so powerful in the roots of this “tree dreams”… Thank you!
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Thank you so much for your words. This one was a little different, I’m glad you liked it!
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There are so many lines in this that I just love! The tree root image is absolutely magnificent.
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Thanks so much–the tree/root was actually in my dream this morning. I don’t usually remember them so vividly, but the poet part of my brain said, write it down! ๐
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I’m so glad you did! It’s funny but I had a tree dream last week (didn’t write it, maybe I should try) so when I read this it really spoke to me!
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My fave part is, “The garden needs no consolation”–very peaceful, probably why many people sit on benches near gardens.
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It’s true, there is so much peace among the green growing things!
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Oh, Jennifer, I like this very much – loved the crying of many shades of green and the dream of the hundred rooted tree – wonderful! K
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Thank you for reading, K, and for your kind comment!
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Ditto, all of these comments, Jennifer. Really evocative. Great job.
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Thank you. ๐
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