Of course I am much younger than the old
man, my neighbor, his white head and legs
uncovered as he dozes with newspaper
in the sun. His yard is perfectly trimmed;
the garden surrounding the elegant green
is the wife’s doing, a riot of blossom in May:
roses, clematis, some German shrub I can’t
name. Oh, and a lemon tree. (In winter, it lives
in the glassed-in sun-room.) The wife is old,
too, pottering with her plants all day,
bending over in her rolled-up elastic-waist
khakis and on windy days, the fleece jacket
and her light curls all jumbled. (It is not
because I am getting old that I also wear
rolled-up elastic-waist khakis and potter
around the garden, talking to the plants,
or that I find myself sitting on the sunny
patio, dozing over this notebook.)
Fabulous, absolutely fabulous. I so enjoy your writing.
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You are so sweet. I always look forward to hearing from you! (no pressure)
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Well, as I’ve mentioned before, I’m a picky reader–you’re truly gifted.
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❤
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This is just lovely. I have neighbors like that and I hope we can be just like them one day…
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Isn’t it interesting how our idea of “the good life” changes over time? Thanks for reading!
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I love your writing style! Glad I found you via the Gargleblaster! Yes, “the good life” does change…although I wouldn’t say no to the idea of being like these people but doing it in, say, a cottage in Ireland or in the South of France, for example! 😉
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Oh, yeah! We could be neighbors!
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Love this!!
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Oh, thank you. Always glad to hear from you!
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Me, too! I am so happy we connected.
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🙂
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At the age of 71, I, too, find myself entertained by “old people.” They are so quirky, aren’t they? And they can dress so oddly. Thus, yes, I enjoy the details in the poem about the old ones and smile wryly at the irony.
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