I am poured and swelled to bursting
like the brimful cup. You would say,
surface tension. You would say,
internal pressure. The molecules
at the top, not being surrounded
by the same, are pulled, irresistibly,
inwards. You would say, this contractive
tendency allows the surface to resist
external forces. It will push back.
I would say,
it makes perfect sense.
I would say,
I can even name the molecules:
failure, love, grief
wrongs, love, forgiveness
child, parent, love
Starting out in a completely different place, I found myself using lots of repetition, perhaps still pondering Quickly’s Prompt for April 22. Thanks to Wikipedia for a crash course in “surface tension.”
Oh wow–I love your poetry, though the “science part” made my eyes glaze over. Then I got to the molecules and turned misty-eyed.
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Yeah, science makes my eyes glaze over, too. I’ll try not to use it too often!
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Oh, no worries! I read poetry everyday that I don’t always get all the nuances of–so I try to take in the overall spirit, especially of the specific poet–and it’s all good!
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