Mad-eyed from stating the obvious
and weary withal—what did you
expect from your sojourn
with this crudely formed clay?
Where obvious is the flavor du jour
every journey must result in frustration
a new vow to renounce
it all for your cave and a bagpipe-drowning
of the still, small voice
The days of sackcloth and ashes are gone
we will laughingly proclaim all our sins
in a most barbaric yawp. If you prayed
for subtle or sublime
you have come to the wrong town
Inspired by Quickly’s Prompts from April 9: Take a line from a newly-discovered (in my case, rediscovered) favorite poet and use it as a starting point. I used a line from Richard Wilbur’s “Advice to a Prophet.”
“Laughingly proclaim all our sins”–not much humility there, eh?
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Ha. In my first draft, I had “digital rooftops.”
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I do love the play on word, very nice poem. Thanks for sharing. FGM
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Thank you 🙂
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